Walt: use interesting language.
Walt: use varying sentences.
Walt :use personal voice.
Skyscraper
Hey guys and gals! I will be telling you about the best pokemon in town its... Skyscraper! Skyscraper is a mixture of a bat and butterfly.
The awesome Skyscraper lives in her amazing pokeball which is yellow, blue and orange. When she doesn't want to stay in her pokeball, she spends her time in dark forests because she loves sleeping in the day. So if she's in a dark forest she plays all night long (Thats called nocturnal).
Skyscraper has a mixture of earth and flying.She loves to fly and move earth around e.g rocks, stones, concrete etc ). Skyscraper has flown where no one has ever flown before.
By Jireh
I like your adjectives Jireh and the extra information you have used in places. Next time, try some similes and alliteration. Mrs Simpson
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