KARMAN's pokemon

WALT use interesting language

Boom! Fire Portal burns straight through rocks because he is always on fire ouch! he  is hot as lava. Fire Portal has senses that make portal which makes him go anywhere in a second. If he wants to get overpowered he has to make a portal to a volcano and just sit in it


Fire Portal looks like a pterodactyl.He  is orange because he is always on fire. he has sharp ears, teeth, and sharp claws. his ears have portal sense. His teeth are sharp as a needle and his claws were curved as a eagles beak.





Nice expretions karman i really liked it 
good pokemon;Ayush 
Ayush - this is not constructive.  You haven't told him what is good about his writing or fixed your spelling!  Mrs Simpson

Great use of interesting language (adjectives, similes and short sentences) Karman.  Next time, think about your punctuation as you type.  Mrs Simpson