My Pokemon, Liberty Mouse

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WALT: use varying sentence lengths.

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Liberty is a beautiful mouse full of love, character and love. Did you know she lives on the foot of the powerful Statue of Liberty. That would be so cool!! Before we get to into it, lets move onto the description of Libby's head, where all the brains of this beauty sits.

Sitting on top of Libby's round as a bubble head is an elegant, blue crown, as blue as the Tasmin Sea. The super sharp spikes on Libby's crown are electrified. She uses the crown as a frisbee when there are baddies around, she takes it off and takes them down! Liberty's ears are really sensitive, she can hear for up to miles away. Libby has long eyelashes that keep her importantly precious eyes safe from the sun. Her cute as a button nose can sense danger, but also harmony. Libby loves the sound of laughter and her nose twitches with excitement at least 20 times a day.

So now a little bit about this adorable mouse named Liberty. Go New York City and see for yourself, there you will find Libby with a twinkle in her eye and a flame in her paw.

By Rory

Great descriptive words Rory.  You have given us plenty of information.  Make sure when you type though, that you have it all down on the screen!  Mrs Simpson