Keiki's Pokemon

This is a report about my Pokemon called Star Fin.It is a steel and water type Pokemon.Star Fin is weak against electric and ground type Pokemon.

Star Fin's looks are very scary his head is big and his eyes are very menacing.Star Fin's body color is blue at the top and grey at the bottom.

This is a very rare Pokemon and he can learn 6 water attacks and 6 steel type moves.He is 2 meters long and his body is very buff.

   
                By Keiki


This is quite brief Keiki - can you give me more please.  I like some of your descriptive words - but again, we need more to hold the readers' interest.  Mrs Simpson