Hannah's pokemon

WALT: Use interesting language
WALT: Use varying sentence lengths
WALT: Use personal voice

Have you ever seen a bright pink pokemon hedgehog that always wears a purple headband with a purple bow attached to it? Well, no! No you haven't because all she really does is sit in her bush or someone elses! This bright pink hedgehog names her bush after herself, the SHAZY BUSH!!!!

Shazy has a bright pink body and has tiny pink paws, two in the front and two in the back. Shazy also has brown prickles also knowen as hair, Shazy's hair/prickles have a red line an inch away from the middle of her head.
Shazy's paws have a great deal of speed so she can zoom from bush to bush without being seen"Wow."Shazy's brown hair/prickles help her camouflage by rolling up into a ball so she looks like sticks.

This hedgehog, Shazy has a head that is attached to her body like a normal hedgehog and she also has big green eyes that pop out of her head. Shazy has a black heart shaped nose, tiny eyelashes and three long whiskers on each check.

The sounds that Shazy makes when she is happy is, snuffle snuffle, snuffle snuffle but when she is sad she goes like this, eh eh, eh eh. When Shazy is angry this is what she sounds like, FUM FUM BOO!!!!! Yeah, I don't want to be by her wen she is angry! Last but least I will tell you what she eats, Shazy likes to slugs and clean cold water.

Great adjectives and descriptive language Hannah.  I like your paragraphs too.  next time - try some similes, and check your spelling!  Mrs Simpson