WALT: Use interesting language
WALT:Use varying sentence lenghts
WALT:Use personal voice
Name: Zooma
Power: Super Speed
Have you ever seen Zooma? She is the cutest pokemon you will ever see. Zooma is friendly to anyone she meets. Zooma is very fast and will lay in your yard. So if you see Zooma she will look like this.
Zoomas head looks as yello as a lemon. Her big blue eyes are always on watch for her threats. Zoomas green and purple hair are as soft as a new born kitten. Her super dark black nose is always smelling for food "like always."
Zoomas body is flat at the top so she can put or carry stuff on it. Zooma body is so hard that if you bump into it you will go flying! "I mean really far away."
By Asher.
I like this part of your report Asher. You have described your pokemon and used a simile. Remember to check your tense and punctuation too. Mrs Simpson
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