Sofia's panther poem

WALT : Use detail to engage interest in the reader.
                                                                              PANTHER
If I were a panther I'd run away from poachers trying to catch me,
If I were a panther I'd go for a sleep just after a hunt and I'd cilmb my tall tree,
If I were a panther I'd run to be free and also I'd run to catch my delicious lunch,
If I were a panther I'd catch my yummy lunch and make its bones go crunchy crunch,
If I were a panther I'd run till I drop from hungry hunters chasing after me,
If I were a panther I'd be the best me I can be
By Sofia